From 9daa52bb327ab238952636f7d48103d4c84e675b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Luke Shumaker <LukeShu@sbcglobal.net>
Date: Thu, 15 Nov 2012 01:13:38 -0500
Subject: slightly reword the description on the main page

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     <h2>A <em>libre</em> version of Arch Linux</h2>
 
     <p>You've reached the website for <strong>Parabola GNU/Linux-libre</strong>,
-    a project aiming to provide a fully free as in freedom Arch Linux,
-    the lightweight and flexible GNU/Linux distribution that tries to
-    Keep It Simple.</p>
+    a project aiming to provide a fully free (as in freedom)
+    derivative of Arch Linux, the lightweight and flexible GNU/Linux
+    distribution that tries to Keep It Simple.</p>
 
     <p>Currently we provide the official packages from Arch that meet
     the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/distros/free-system-distribution-guidelines.html">FSDG</a>,
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