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author | Luke Shumaker <LukeShu@sbcglobal.net> | 2012-11-15 00:48:55 -0500 |
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committer | Luke Shumaker <LukeShu@sbcglobal.net> | 2012-11-15 00:48:55 -0500 |
commit | f4c1673124ec4490ca34180eadeb1edcc7b7fe92 (patch) | |
tree | 01d5a3effc2411151f3c7cc057fe4d4f49b7b605 | |
parent | a9117384bf194929713198504a099d7e687b60a7 (diff) |
Clean up text in various places.
* It's "Arch Linux", not "Archlinux" or "ArchLinux"
* Reword the description of what packages we have on the homepage
* Add myself to the AUTHORS file
* Fix the typo s/instalation/installation/
-rw-r--r-- | AUTHORS | 1 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | templates/public/about.html | 10 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | templates/public/index.html | 16 |
3 files changed, 15 insertions, 12 deletions
@@ -11,3 +11,4 @@ Dusty Phillips <dusty@archlinux.org> # PARABOLAWEB AUTHORS Konstantinos Karantias <kostis@gtklocker.com> Nicolás Reynolds <fauno@kiwwwi.com.ar> +Luke Shumaker <lukeshu@sbcglobal.net> diff --git a/templates/public/about.html b/templates/public/about.html index 5ef4286b..402379d2 100644 --- a/templates/public/about.html +++ b/templates/public/about.html @@ -5,8 +5,8 @@ <h2 class="title">Parabola Presentation</h2> <p>Almost a year ago we started a project to offer the Free Software - community the chance of using an Archlinux system completely freed from - proprietary software.</p> + community the chance of using an Arch Linux system completely + freed from proprietary software.</p> <p>Today we have repositories and installable images of this wonderful GNU/Linux distribution from which we have eliminated the non-free software @@ -25,10 +25,10 @@ package, you can build your own operating system in the way you want and learn a lot along the way.</p> - <h3>Free Archlinux</h3> + <h3>Free Arch Linux</h3> <p>Following the minimalist, KISS, spirit of Arch, we have managed to - achieve its freedom in a simple way. To free your Archlinux installation, + achieve its freedom in a simple way. To free your Arch Linux installation, just install our libre repositories list and update your system.</p> <p>No reinstallation needed.</p> @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ <p>Boring tasks are always available. We want to start new projects. We want to help people have servers of their own, with services of their own, with - Parabola Social. We want people to remix their own Archlinux and share it + Parabola Social. We want people to remix their own Arch Linux and share it with the rest of the world.</p> <p>We want Free Software with a social utility for a libre society.</p> diff --git a/templates/public/index.html b/templates/public/index.html index 971b5298..0d57e505 100644 --- a/templates/public/index.html +++ b/templates/public/index.html @@ -13,13 +13,15 @@ <h2>A <em>libre</em> version of Arch Linux</h2> <p>You've reached the website for <strong>Parabola GNU/Linux-libre</strong>, - a project aiming to provide a fully free as in freedom Archlinux, the - lightweight and flexible GNU/Linux distribution that tries to Keep It - Simple.</p> + a project aiming to provide a fully free as in freedom Arch Linux, + the lightweight and flexible GNU/Linux distribution that tries to + Keep It Simple.</p> - <p>Currently we provide the official libre packages from Arch, plus our own - libre replacements when necessary, all of them optimized for the i686, - x86-64, and mips64el architectures.</p> + <p>Currently we provide the official packages from Arch that meet + the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/distros/free-system-distribution-guidelines.html">FSDG</a>, + replacements for those that don't, and our own additions, all of + them optimized for the i686, x86-64, and mips64el + architectures.</p> <p>You can find us on IRC at <a href="irc://irc.freenode.net/#parabola">irc.freenode.net/#parabola</a>.</p> @@ -115,7 +117,7 @@ <li><a href="https://wiki.parabolagnulinux.org/installation_guide" title="Official installation guide">Official Installation Guide</a></li> <li><a href="https://wiki.parabolagnulinux.org/Migration" - title="Free your Arch instalation">Migration from Archlinux</a></li> + title="Free your Arch installation">Migration from Arch Linux</a></li> </ul> <h4>Community</h4> |